Network Trouble

Apr 17, 2015 20:24
Today, we could not connect the internet at our university all day.

Since I had retained my study data to the cloud, I couldn't do anything today.

I'd like to demand decent network management to our university.
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今日は大学で、一日中インターネットが繋がりませんでした。

私は研究データなどをクラウドに保管していたので、今日は何もできませんでした。

大学にはもう少しちゃんと管理をして欲しいです。
No. 1　Timmy's correction
  • I'd like to demand decent network management to our university.
  • I'd like to demand decent network management from our university (authorities).
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
Timmy
You are welcome!
No. 2　c_denise's correction
  • Today, we could not connect the internet at our university all day.
  • We could not connect to the internet at our university all day.
  • Since I had retained my study data to the cloud, I couldn't do anything today.
  • Since all my study materials are saved on the cloud, I couldn't do anything today.
  • I'd like to demand decent network management to our university.
  • I'd like to demand decent network management from our university.
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting me! :D
c_denise
You're welcome :)
No. 3　Eddie's correction
  • Since I had retained my study data to the cloud, I couldn't do anything today.
  • Since my data was saved to the cloud, I couldn't do anything today.
  • I'd like to demand decent network management to our university.
  • I'd like to demand decent network management to our university.
kanotown
Thank you so much for your corrections! :)
No. 4　Eddie's correction
Did you get a day off?
kanotown
Maybe it is right to some extent.
Yesterday, I just read papers at my university.
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